{"id":1802,"date":"2021-10-21T23:16:31","date_gmt":"2021-10-22T06:16:31","guid":{"rendered":"https:\/\/teahousehome.com\/booksandcoffee\/?p=1802"},"modified":"2021-10-21T23:16:31","modified_gmt":"2021-10-22T06:16:31","slug":"book-another-day-of-novel-editing","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/teahousehome.com\/booksandcoffee\/2021\/10\/21\/book-another-day-of-novel-editing\/","title":{"rendered":"Book: Another Day of Novel Editing"},"content":{"rendered":"\n<figure class=\"wp-block-image size-full is-style-rounded\"><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" width=\"1000\" height=\"211\" src=\"https:\/\/teahousehome.com\/booksandcoffee\/wp-content\/uploads\/2021\/07\/AEG-sponged-cloud-banner.jpg\" alt=\"\" class=\"wp-image-1415\" srcset=\"https:\/\/teahousehome.com\/booksandcoffee\/wp-content\/uploads\/2021\/07\/AEG-sponged-cloud-banner.jpg 1000w, https:\/\/teahousehome.com\/booksandcoffee\/wp-content\/uploads\/2021\/07\/AEG-sponged-cloud-banner-300x63.jpg 300w, https:\/\/teahousehome.com\/booksandcoffee\/wp-content\/uploads\/2021\/07\/AEG-sponged-cloud-banner-768x162.jpg 768w\" sizes=\"auto, (max-width: 767px) 89vw, (max-width: 1000px) 54vw, (max-width: 1071px) 543px, 580px\" \/><\/figure>\n\n\n\n<p>I crossed 28,000 words of the re-write\/editing project!  <\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>I think it&#8217;s going well.  I&#8217;m excited about some events that take place in the story: it really does build up to a proper climax or two.  <\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>During this rewrite, I&#8217;m seeing that my chapter breaks aren&#8217;t well placed within the story.  I&#8217;m sure I can do better!  I should also examine the number of subsections I have, which mark changes of scene.  I don&#8217;t know if they should be chapters or not, but I do think it is useful to announce location\/place\/participant changes.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>There is a crisis\/subplot that feels really relevant to the main character, but I&#8217;m unsure whether it plays out at the right time within the story.  I&#8217;ll have to examine it again.  It may be possible for it to occur at the same time, but be explained and examined by the characters later in the story&#8230;<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>There are some nouns that I&#8217;m renaming from the first draft as I write, and I&#8217;m trying to rename them consistently throughout the book.   (Since the book is being re-entered, I can&#8217;t just do some sort of global search and replace yet.)  This is the sort of thing that I was diagramming in a mind mapping program earlier this week, but a simple table or set of tables listing characters and the names of things (departments, hallways, offices, whether the cafeteria is called that or if it is a staff lounge, etc.) would also help me maintain continuity.  So would an editor, but I&#8217;m not there yet!<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p> I&#8217;m also doing fun internet searches for things like, &#8216;how many words can I type without injuring myself,&#8217; because the all-meeting era of work meant that I really was NOT typing all day, every day, and my arms have their doubts about this.  I&#8217;m still learning the ergonomic keyboard.  I am learning to take breaks more regularly, and to use my amazing headphones to have a few lively dance numbers in the kitchen, so my blood circulates, and my body remembers life beyond my office chair.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>Summary: <strong>I&#8217;m enjoying this, I&#8217;m glad I&#8217;m doing this, I&#8217;m gaining some new perspectives on how to improve it.  <\/strong>Also, I believe this revision is now a higher priority than writing my fifth (!) novel(la) in November for NaNoWriMo, so I&#8217;ll keep at it.<\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>I crossed 28,000 words of the re-write\/editing project! I think it&#8217;s going well. I&#8217;m excited about some events that take place in the story: it really does build up to a proper climax or two. During this rewrite, I&#8217;m seeing that my chapter breaks aren&#8217;t well placed within the story. I&#8217;m sure I can do &hellip; <\/p>\n<p class=\"link-more\"><a href=\"https:\/\/teahousehome.com\/booksandcoffee\/2021\/10\/21\/book-another-day-of-novel-editing\/\" class=\"more-link\">Continue reading<span class=\"screen-reader-text\"> &#8220;Book: Another Day of Novel Editing&#8221;<\/span><\/a><\/p>\n","protected":false},"author":1,"featured_media":0,"comment_status":"open","ping_status":"open","sticky":false,"template":"","format":"standard","meta":{"jetpack_post_was_ever_published":false,"_jetpack_newsletter_access":"","_jetpack_dont_email_post_to_subs":false,"_jetpack_newsletter_tier_id":0,"_jetpack_memberships_contains_paywalled_content":false,"_jetpack_memberships_contains_paid_content":false,"footnotes":""},"categories":[9],"tags":[123],"class_list":["post-1802","post","type-post","status-publish","format-standard","hentry","category-books","tag-writing"],"jetpack_featured_media_url":"","jetpack_sharing_enabled":true,"_links":{"self":[{"href":"https:\/\/teahousehome.com\/booksandcoffee\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/1802","targetHints":{"allow":["GET"]}}],"collection":[{"href":"https:\/\/teahousehome.com\/booksandcoffee\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts"}],"about":[{"href":"https:\/\/teahousehome.com\/booksandcoffee\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/types\/post"}],"author":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/teahousehome.com\/booksandcoffee\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/users\/1"}],"replies":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/teahousehome.com\/booksandcoffee\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/comments?post=1802"}],"version-history":[{"count":3,"href":"https:\/\/teahousehome.com\/booksandcoffee\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/1802\/revisions"}],"predecessor-version":[{"id":1805,"href":"https:\/\/teahousehome.com\/booksandcoffee\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/1802\/revisions\/1805"}],"wp:attachment":[{"href":"https:\/\/teahousehome.com\/booksandcoffee\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/media?parent=1802"}],"wp:term":[{"taxonomy":"category","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/teahousehome.com\/booksandcoffee\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/categories?post=1802"},{"taxonomy":"post_tag","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/teahousehome.com\/booksandcoffee\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/tags?post=1802"}],"curies":[{"name":"wp","href":"https:\/\/api.w.org\/{rel}","templated":true}]}}